ext_1650: (CK love (digital_diva))
ext_1650 ([identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] popslash_lollipops 2006-03-13 02:38 pm (UTC)

Re: Sound (continued)

Raven. I love you so much right now.

I've just been up to take Brock out, he peed on me again, it's sleeting like crazy so I was freezing and wet, but you made me smile. For that I thank you.

This was lovely, and you're a star for tailoring it into something I'd like. JC and Chris eating together fills me with glee, and JC kicked him, with flipflops on *g*

There's no need to worry about the dialogue, I thought it was great. I could just see them bickering, and Chris sulking *g*

"And quite well, thank you." JC replies with a wink

Love that line!

I really liked Aaron defending his brother like that, almost as much as I liked Nick's sneaky plan. Though even that's eclipsed by this.

He runs a finger along the shake that still clings to Chris' neck then sticks his finger in his mouth, sucks it clean before removing his finger with an audible pop.

Oh my guh! I love those boys so much. I love this story so much.

Thank you. *hugs you tight*

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