ext_34366 ([identity profile] ravenbat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] popslash_lollipops 2006-03-13 11:16 pm (UTC)

Re: Sound (continued)

I am so happy that you liked it. :) I know that a lot of people don't like stories that are mostly dialogue, so whenever I have a story go in that direction, I worry all the more. This just felt "right" for dialogue. In my mind I could picture JC and Chris sitting across from each other. I could see Chris being all sulky and trying to squish down in the seat and use the menu to hide. I could see JC being amused by Chris and still annoyed at him. I also can see JC being rather cocky about his "skills" and my first draft I had him saying that "quite well, thank you." and then following up with some comment about "do you want references?" or something like "Just ask Lance." But in the end, I decided to just stay with the one line.

For some reason I just can picture Aaron wanting to get some sort of revenge on Chris, even if he was a part of Nick's sneaky plan. I just see Aaron enjoying himself a little more than Nick intended.

Nick and sucking on his finger. hee. That visual image makes me go "Guh" and in my mind, I can imagine it just about bringing Chris to his knees. lol.

I'm happy with how this turned out. I'm even happier that you liked it. :) I'm sorry for all that is going on that is keeping you from smiling.

You're welcome for everything. *hugs you tighter*

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