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[turps33.livejournal.com]

It's been a stressful day today and I'd love if someone could write me something that'll make me smile. H/C, humour, schoop, the choice is yours.

Chris/anyone please :)

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[turps33.livejournal.com]

Raven. I love you so much right now.

I've just been up to take Brock out, he peed on me again, it's sleeting like crazy so I was freezing and wet, but you made me smile. For that I thank you.

This was lovely, and you're a star for tailoring it into something I'd like. JC and Chris eating together fills me with glee, and JC kicked him, with flipflops on *g*

There's no need to worry about the dialogue, I thought it was great. I could just see them bickering, and Chris sulking *g*

"And quite well, thank you." JC replies with a wink

Love that line!

I really liked Aaron defending his brother like that, almost as much as I liked Nick's sneaky plan. Though even that's eclipsed by this.

He runs a finger along the shake that still clings to Chris' neck then sticks his finger in his mouth, sucks it clean before removing his finger with an audible pop.

Oh my guh! I love those boys so much. I love this story so much.

Thank you. *hugs you tight*

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[ravenbat.livejournal.com]

I am so happy that you liked it. :) I know that a lot of people don't like stories that are mostly dialogue, so whenever I have a story go in that direction, I worry all the more. This just felt "right" for dialogue. In my mind I could picture JC and Chris sitting across from each other. I could see Chris being all sulky and trying to squish down in the seat and use the menu to hide. I could see JC being amused by Chris and still annoyed at him. I also can see JC being rather cocky about his "skills" and my first draft I had him saying that "quite well, thank you." and then following up with some comment about "do you want references?" or something like "Just ask Lance." But in the end, I decided to just stay with the one line.

For some reason I just can picture Aaron wanting to get some sort of revenge on Chris, even if he was a part of Nick's sneaky plan. I just see Aaron enjoying himself a little more than Nick intended.

Nick and sucking on his finger. hee. That visual image makes me go "Guh" and in my mind, I can imagine it just about bringing Chris to his knees. lol.

I'm happy with how this turned out. I'm even happier that you liked it. :) I'm sorry for all that is going on that is keeping you from smiling.

You're welcome for everything. *hugs you tighter*