Kevin/Lance

[grapekitten.livejournal.com]

Au Where Lance finds love on the internet, but doesn't know it is Kevin, whom he claims to dislike.

Comments

Re: "High School Sucks" Pt 3

[blueboxers.livejournal.com]

lol. I'm glad you liked it. Was it close enough? I kind of didn't like that Kev never really interacted with Lance. But to fit in better I had to leave him out. I was afraid I'd end up doing a cheep version of "You've Got Mail" lol.

I wrote it thinking about that line... I was going to leave it as "I told you I didn't tell me." And end it there... would that have worked better?

Re: "High School Sucks" Pt 3

[grapekitten.livejournal.com]

I loved it. It'd have been coll to see Kevin hate Lance as well, but I didn't think about it. The line is perfect the way it is. It makes him sound a little cocky, but at a point to where it's sort of sexy.