AJ/Brian or Howie/Brian

[bubbleforest.livejournal.com]

I know I haven't contributed in a while, but I've had a crappy, crappy day and I was wondering if anyone could write me something? Either AJ/Brian or Howie/Brian, I don't care. Just so long as it's happy. Or angsty ending in happy. Thank you so much in advance.

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Brian/AJ

[abrasiveness.livejournal.com]

Hey Mette =)
You don't know me but I'm a big fan of yours, and so I decided to write this little thingie for you. Please be kind, it's my first attempt :)


The gentle rasp of tongue against flushed skin. Stuttering breaths of air with each rise and fall of his chest. Fluttering heartbeat hammering against his fingertips as he catches the bony wrists in his grip. He touches him with all his senses, he feels him with all his senses.

The scent of him; spice and smoke, an exotic combination of all the elements. The feel of him; warmed silk stretched over the sharp prominent bones and hard lean muscle. The sight of him; head tilted back, eyes of velvet brown closed tightly, thick twists of eyelashes curling against passion-reddened cheeks, swollen lower lip caught on the sharp white of teeth. The sound of him; rising pleas and whispered wantings, hitched breathing and constant cries. The taste of him; warm honey and hot cinnamon, the sweetest of all sins.

Where he was beautiful outside this room, he was gorgeous within it. Vulnerable and trusting. Wanting yet unsure how to take. He had been broken, the shards of his soul smashed and littered over the expanse of an empty heart. Brian was putting him back together, painstakingly connecting the pieces to once again create the image of passion, determination, and confidence.

Blue gaze storming with lust and love, want and absolute need, focused on the precious being beneath him. Fluid body arching and rolling to meet him, declarations of love and apologies following on the heels of each ragged exhale. Brian leans down to capture those words, to breathe in their meaning and survive off the promises. Mouth meets mouth, sweet tangle of tongues.

There had been obstacles and hardships, failures and disappointments but finally they had arrived at this point. He was AJ’s and AJ was his.

And that was the way it was always supposed to be.

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So...yeah..Good? Ok? Delete it? Shoot myself? No matter your opinion I hope you atleast enjoyed it =)
-Jay

[bubbleforest.livejournal.com]

Oh. my. God.

First of all, I'm so sorry I haven't replied sooner. I've been away all week and then I come to this! OH MY GOD. This is your FIRST attempt?! Holy shit. This is so, so beautiful. The imagery, the description - oh my goodness, I can barely breathe.

The scent of him; spice and smoke, an exotic combination of all the elements. The feel of him; warmed silk stretched over the sharp prominent bones and hard lean muscle. The sight of him; head tilted back, eyes of velvet brown closed tightly, thick twists of eyelashes curling against passion-reddened cheeks, swollen lower lip caught on the sharp white of teeth. The sound of him; rising pleas and whispered wantings, hitched breathing and constant cries. The taste of him; warm honey and hot cinnamon, the sweetest of all sins.

I have to paste the entire paragraph because I love it all. I cannot get over how beautiful this is. It's like flowing poetry. AJ is so stunning in this and you use the senses Brian describe him with SO well. Just. Gah. How could you think I would not like this? It's gorgeous.

Thank you so, so much. I'm gonna go read it again. BEAUTIFUL. (Also, in case you didn't see, unoriginal27 posted feedback below as well. She just forgot to add it as a comment to your comment so you'd get the notification, silly girl. *g*) And you're a fan of mine? Aw, thank you. <3<3<3<3

[abrasiveness.livejournal.com]

I'm so sorry for not replying sooner! I never got an e-mail stating I had received a reply...but anyways...

I can't tell you how much your kind words mean to me. Praise from you no less. Thank you so much, it feels like a huge weight has been lifted off my shoulders knowing you enjoyed it, so once again, thank you soooo very much <3

I think I now see why other writers love getting feedback for their work, I have to say it's a great feeling. =)

[nothingscripted.livejournal.com]

*jaw drops to the floor* pardon my french, but holy fuck.

*gives two thumbs up* i could definitely get used to reading that. sweet mother of god, that was... really hott and sensual and... very a-roky... thank you for writing it even though it wasn't my request :D

keep up the excellent work!

[abrasiveness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *blushes*
That means alot knowing you enjoyed it, so once again thank you for your feedback =)

[findmeakor.livejournal.com]

You have the ability to create a seemingly tangible work of art with only the use of your words. It's gorgeous writing.