Lance / Nick

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Lance and Nick, focussing on the sense of taste, please and thank you.

Comments

[turlough]

it seemed a little choppy

I don't think so. The narrative felt very much like a half-awake Lance to me, perhaps a little disjointed but in the way you are when you've just woken up.

(LaNi sounds like a primadonna to me, not a pairing :-)